… and I’m pretty sure my next rhetorical move will be to look at the peer reviews that I have received, make many corrections based off of those, along with the corrections that professor Lay has given me. With these sources of information that have all of the things that could be changed within my essay, I should be able bring my grade up by a letter at least. First I’ll start with the bigger, more important things that should be corrected, Like citations, fact checking in the book, and using more quotes. Then I’ll move on to the smaller things like punctuation and grammatical errors. Then hopefully after all that is accomplished I’ll have a strong essay to hand in.